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Chapter 1 - HERE
Chapter 2 - [link]
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Kumiko's p.o.v-
It was dark. I couldn't see anything. The floor felt glossy and wet. Where was I? Wasn't I sleeping in my bed a few hours ago?Where was my comfy bed? Why was I in this dark place? I tried to get up but I couldn't.Why? Somethig was pulling me down. I tried again, and I was able to get up but I was covered in . . . black liquid? The substance was slimy. I shivered as I felt it. I looked in awe as it changed from black to red. It looked like blood. It felt like blood - a liquid like substance but leaving stains behind. I sniffed it and it smelt like blood too. What was going on? All of a sudden, black gaping faces were screaming at me from the blood.The black holes that shaped their faces were dark and ghost-like. "AAaaahhhh!" I screamed. I ran away from the monster as fast as i could. Sweat and blood all over my body. My feet slaping onto the gloosy black floors. There seemed to be no way out of this place. There was just darkness . . . I started to cry. This can't be real! Then I saw a light. It looked like an angelic creature. I stopped. I wasn't sure whether to walk up to it but eventually I did so. The creature was a boy. He had the sweetest face I ever laid my eyes on. I touched his face. He looked at me and smiled. I smiled back. For some reason I felt . . . complete. Then I heard the monster coming. It's moaning got loader as it came closer. I turned around and saw the horrible slither creature towards us. I started to panick. "HELP ME!" I grabbed hold of the angelic boy's torso. I looked up at him. He looked determined. He stood in front of me - his light glistening more than ever. He fought the monster. In a few minutes, the monster started to win. Then in an instant the creaure shot through his heart. He was dead in an instant. "NO!" I screamed. The monster started to consume him into his mouth. Tears were steaming down my face as I screamed "N-no!" Then it came for me.

"AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!" I wake up to sweat drippiing down my face. I started to shake. I curled up into a little ball on my bed. Why did I have such a weird dream? "kumiko, are you okay? What's wrong!?" yelled Melinda, as she opened my bedroom door. Melinda was my family's maid. She was practically the only friend I had that isn't on the internet. Her piercing blues eyes stared at my unworthy yellow. "Are you sure your okay? You were screaming." I nodded and sat up in my bed. "You wanna talk about it?" she questioned. "I rather not..." I implied. Melinda sighed and sat on my bed. It was silent but she continued to look at me. She scooted over so she could get close. "I love your hair." Melinda said, trying to change the subject. She grabbed a comb and started brushing it. "I've always wanted black hair. My hair just reminds me of . . . mud." D: "What are you talking about? Your hair is gorgeous!" I yelled. What I said was true of course. Melinda had gorgeous curly, chocolate brown hair. She is tall and lean - not one once of fat on her. She also had these insanely beautiful, icy blue eyes. It just wasn't fair how beautiful she was. She has been working for my family for four years. "You don't know what your talking about." she said nonchalantly while waving her hand about as if she was shooing the thought away. We were silent as she continued to combed my hair. For the next hour and a half, we painted each other's nails, and played with our hair. Finally, Melinda got off the bed and muttered "Well, I got to get back to work. Get in the shower, so we can actually do something fun for today." She walked out of the room. I sighed and flopped my head on my pillows. I looked at the clock. It was nine in the morning. I continued to stare at my room. I looked at the old, chipped purple walls. I sighed. I really need to redo my room. My room is actually realy messy. Clothes were everywhere. Papers of my drawing and stories were scattered throught the floor and walls. Not to mention my bed is never neat (Melinda doesn't even bother to clean it. She knows it'll be messed up again.) and my bathroom isn't all that clean either. I got out of bed and went across to my dresser. When I got some clothes I noticed my phone. It said "New text message". I opened the phone.
It was a text from Kishiko. It read " Hey. I'm bored. What are you doing?" I replied back with "I just woke up. I'm getting in the shower." As i wrote, I passed the dresser and got into the shower. Ten minutes later, I got out of the shower and read Kisiko's text. "Cool, I'm in school. I'm talking to Haru! ;D" "AAAAAaaaaaawwwwwwww! You llloooooovvvvvvveess him! <3" I texted back. Two minutes later she wrote back saying: "Shut up! Gawd, school just started, it sucks... D:" I said "Oh it started. What's your school like?" For two hours Kishiko was talking to me, telling me about how the school is for people who want to pursue a job in the creative arts, while still getting a highschool diploma. Besides that it was like an ordinary school.
TWO WEEKS LATER: For the past two weeks I have been thinking about that school . . . Creative Arts Academy. Kishiko said it was for stuff like designing, art, creative writing and cosmotology but most important of all: creative writing. I have been writing for as long as I can remember. I have alwaysed enjoyed creating fictional characters and imaginary faraway places. If I entered that school, I could get even better at writing than I already am! I decided to give it a try. So I texted Kishiko.
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Okay! That's the first chapter! It's kinda short but the other chapter will be a little longer. I post the next one soon. Bye!

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:iconwarchild15:
whoah!! goodluck!

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Lady Gaga: Fu.. fu. fu.. fu.. kur faiz fu..fu..ker faiz! MU MU MU MUH! :turbopoke: :strip:

warchiLd WTF??!! :faint:
:iconanimedork1:
Thank you! :)

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Mornings should be illegal...:p
"Everyone deserves a happy ending, no matter who they are..."
:iconwarchild15:
:D

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Lady Gaga: Fu.. fu. fu.. fu.. kur faiz fu..fu..ker faiz! MU MU MU MUH! :turbopoke: :strip:

warchiLd WTF??!! :faint:
:iconrainwaterfall:
cute!

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Im a sasu and naru pairings girl I love all these couples

Sasu and Hina
Sasu and Ino
Sasu and Saku
Sasu and Karin


Naru and Saku
Naru and Hina
Naru and any konoha girl
:iconanimedork1:
Thanx!~:heart:

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Mornings should be illegal...:p
"Everyone deserves a happy ending, no matter who they are..."
:iconkumikosaruwatari:
love it!!!! cant wait for more of this story :nod:

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  /l、
゙(゚、 。 7
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ
:iconrainwaterfall:
your welcome!

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Im a sasu and naru pairings girl I love all these couples

Sasu and Hina
Sasu and Ino
Sasu and Saku
Sasu and Karin


Naru and Saku
Naru and Hina
Naru and any konoha girl
:iconanimedork1:
Thanx! I will probably update more soon.

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Mornings should be illegal...:p
"Everyone deserves a happy ending, no matter who they are..."
:iconkumikosaruwatari:
yay :dance:

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  /l、
゙(゚、 。 7
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ

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